I am learning to write a memoir poem. (This recalls a moment in time from my past that links to an emotion I felt at that time) The emotion I have chosen to link my memoir to is….
In my memoir I describe the scene and situation using strong adjective, nouns and verbs.
I hope you enjoy it.
Deep Cove is usual enough
Misty Clouds surround the mountain ranges , While the dull water takes it’s course, Keas chirp among the mass of native trees.
An ordinary school doing ordinary things.
The drained dingy powers on,the worthless rods decay in our hands, we try to catch the greedy fish.
Rods winding in, hopeful for a shark
Hopeful, devastated, agitated
But what for?
kiora Emma,
ReplyDeleteGood words and good job. sounds like you had fun
Where were you?
danni
room 4
drummond
Hi Danni,
DeleteIn my story i'm at Deep Cove.
Hi Emma,
ReplyDeleteGreat poem on deep cove they were great times what was your favorite part. also who was your favorite parent on the trip
Flynn
Room 4
Drummond primary school