100 Word Challenge Week 10

This weeks 100 Word Challenge prompt was ...Now what do I need?... I was focusing on changing the openings of my sentences and using level 4 punctuation. Here is a link to our class blog for awesome ideas for sentence starters.

“Don’t be late going to bed honey!”Julie and Trevor closed the door and trudged down the driveway.Timmy was a greedy kid who always has to get what he wants, he never took ‘NO’ for an answer.He was a spoilt kid who knew how to get money. But there in the corner of his greedy little eyes was Julie’s credit card. The twinkle in his eyes grew as There in his grimy little hands was the doorway to all the treats in the world!Imaginatively Timmy thought to himself, now what do I need?What should I buy...

100 Word Challenge

This weeks 100 Word Challenges prompt was, The weather changed dramatically... This week I was focusing on using semi-colons and using descriptive langue. I hope you enjoy!

The rain continuously drizzled down the old window creating more condensation. The rain was hitting the roof creating a rhythm that I was sick of.I slowly pulled the blanket over me and scuffed my face with warm buttery popcorn. Why did this day have to be so miserable? But then the weather changed dramatically… The rain had stopped ;the condensation on the window disappeared and the sun peaked out from behind the clouds. I quickly jumped in the car and grabbed my togs. The water was so refreshing against my face. This was better than sitting on the couch!